Polaroid Text

I tried out different brushes for the hand written part on the polaroid photo. My handing isn't pretty, so I hope the group like at least one of these...

I don't like the first image, but I'll put it toward the group any way. The colour is too saturated as well and doesn't fit with the image as a whole.
The second image text is too faint. We want the audience to see the text obviously, so simply making the text darker or thicker will be the way to go.
I like the third image as the text fits well, it's bold easily readable (I hope!)
If the group don't like any, I can always do more.